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Mind Trap -- Review

Reviewer: Iowa BPW President
Book Club 2005 - Iowa BPW March Newsletter

Road rage. We have all heard about it. Now you can read all about what happens in this fascinating book written by BPW/Iowa member, Barbara Derksen. This compelling story will keep you turning those pages as you read this beautifully written story about what happens to a woman whose mind suddenly snaps. Could anger really trigger such a tragedy? Could it happen to you? Read Barbara's thriller and find out.

Barbara will be present at the book club to be held on Sunday morning at our Annual Meeting in Des Moines. She will be there to help facilitate the event and I hope each of you will come and be a part of this very special discussion.


Reviewer: Peggy Phifer
©2004 editor Wordsmith Shoppe.com

What would make an otherwise devoted Christian wife and mother suddenly go berserk and ram her car into an innocent citizen waiting for a bus, crushing him against a brick wall? In this day of increasing stress, responsibilities and pressure -- both from outside and what we do to ourselves -- we all know of or have heard of the appalling incidents of "road rage" occurring almost every day all across the country. Why?

Debra Wiebe, in a fit of anger, charges out of her house, gets behind the wheel of her car and tears out onto the streets -- a lethal weapon on the loose. As her anger surges, something snaps, and a young man -- a total stranger -- loses his life. Witnesses at the scene, who saw it happen, insist it was deliberate. Of course, Debra is arrested, charged with first-degree murder, and jailed -- without bail. Debra doesn't remember anything. She can't believe she could have killed anyone -- let alone in the cold-blooded way they tell her it happened.

Debra's husband, Jerry, hires defense attorney Marcia Dixon. As Marcia begins her investigation into what happened, and spending time with Debra, she sees the explosive nature of Debra's anger--unpredictable and violent. What could possibly cause that kind of rage? It is Marcia's job to find out. In order to defend her client, Marcia knows she has to do some serious digging.

We journey with Debra, Jerry and Marcia through the judicial system. Debra, after her initial hearing, is ordered to spend thirty days of evaluation at a psychiatric facility. Marcia's hope is to be able to plead temporary insanity. But Debra proves a difficult client, her anger erupting, wildly uncontrolled and dangerous, despite her terror at the prospect of spending the rest of her life behind bars -- or worse.

I was captivated by this story. MIND TRAP is a gripping picture of what anger can do. So many of us have hidden pasts, buried trauma, unbearable hurt, dormant until something triggers an emotional upheaval that is beyond our control. Still, underlying and under-girding the Wiebe family is their faith in God, and the knowledge that, however difficult things become at times, He is with us, holding us up, loving us. Debra just has to be whacked upside the head to make her see it, too.

Debra's story grabbed me and I kept reading, and -- though I'm no authority -- I feel the author has done a lot of research into the subject.

Ms. Derksen has written a powerful story -- one I think has a great potential, with a traditional publisher. I would love to see this happen.


Reviewer: Martha G Pearson
writer, teacher, and former president of NW Indiana Writer's Association

Crisis situations are a part of real life. These situations can and do occur, without warning, and without regard to race, gender, or religion. Here's a family whose outer image could make many folks envious. However, this story begins with an impact, which demolishes the fantasy of their harmonious home life.

There is a noteworthy element to this book, which becomes evident in the telling of the story. It is the gifted accomplishment of the MIND TRAP, which walks the reader through the main character's hellish crisis, all the while holding onto a faith in a loving God who promised all of mankind, "...never will I leave you, nor forsake you." Time and again Debra asks for and receives sufficient strength and encouragement, which carries her all the way to the fascinating and enlightened ending.

Purchase Price $16.95



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